måndag 12 november 2012

Caroline Thought... First draft


Caroline thought...

It was a dark night and Jack, George and Caroline sit at Jacks room and looked at a scary movie. Suddenly they saw a shadow. The three children walked out to the hall and looked after what it was, but there where nothing and then they remembered that they where all alone home. They walked in to the room again and continued looked at the scary movie.

After a few minutes they heard a voice which screamed and Jack heard that it was there mothers voice, so the three youth persons run downstairs to the room there they thought the voice came from. When they came in to the living room they saw a loudspeaker at the table and it was from the loudspeaker the screaming voice came from.

The three youth persons was scared stiff, but Caroline took up the phone and tried to ring to there parents, no one answered, it was just a creepy answering machine. Caroline feel someones presence but it wasn't Jack or Georges. The youth persons feel it sent shivers up and down their spine.

Five minutes later Jack, George and Caroline’s parents came home. The three children tell them about the night, that they have seen a shadow and that theres mom had screamed in that loudspeaker and that they had phone them but they didn't answer and that it was a horrible voice in the answering machine. Their dad sad that no one had phone him and he thought that he didn't had covering. Their mom sad that they just had dreamed up after the scary movie so the hole family walked to bed and slept.

Next day the three children decided them to go to bed earlier. It was a dark, rainy night, but the three children slept well. In the middle of the night Caroline wake up and needed to go at toilet. When she sat at the toilet the door suddenly opened. She saw a shadow run away laughing. She hurried to the other and wake them up and sad what she had seen. The two boys didn't believe their sister, but they follow her back to the toilet and there where nothing. Jack sad it to his sister and sad that they could go to bed again and then George saw a blood spot. Jack thought it was from their sister or something which has blood little, at a hand or something. The three youth persons walked back to bed again and slept the rest of the night.

Next day Jack and Caroline think it was something wrong with their brother, they asked what their parents thought and they thought the same. George didn't understand what they talked about. He thought he was normal. But the other in the family thought he was very weirded. He didn't talked so much like he usually did and he didn't want to did something. But the day goes on and it be night.

The night was like a normal night. Next day started with thunder and rainy outside and it was a chilly Sunday. This day Caroline thought Jack was a little bit different, but not so much like George had was the day before. The day was so terrible. Jack want to did something so he asked if George and Caroline want to walked to the cemetery with him. They be very surprise when he asked them, because the cemetery was the worst Jack knew. They had no one on the cemetery who was buried there either.

When they came to the cemetery Jack walked straight towards a grave and he just stood there. Caroline asked what he did, but he didn't answer. George and Caroline were frozen and wanted to go home again, but Jack didn't move. They tried to move him back but it didn't worked. George shaking like a leaf and they didn't knew what they should did. Jack feel like a stone and it was soon darked.

George took up his phone, but the phone didn't worked. Caroline throw her mobile to him and George called their mom. She sad that their daddy while came about a minute. George and Caroline tried to keep them warmed.

The daddy came running to them very scared. He had a man behind him who stared at them, but it wasn't the worst, the man looked like Jack. George and Caroline shouted very loud.
Suddenly the man disappeared and Jack waked up, he didn't understand why them was so frightened. They sad that he had stood forward the grave and a man who looked like him had stood behind their dad. Jack was very surprised about what they sad to him, because he had walked around the cemetery and looked at the graves.

They walked home again and eat. Caroline didn't wanted to was home this night, so she asked their mother if she could goes to Emma this night, a friend to her. She didn't wanted to be home, Caroline had a strange feeling that the house was haunted. Her mom sad that she could slept over at Emma's place. So Caroline walked up to hers room and took hers cargo and went home to Emma.

Emma and Caroline had so fun the hole evening and they went to bed late. In the middle of the night Emma raise Caroline because Caroline screamed uncontrollably. Emma asked what had happened Caroline and Caroline just sad, I had a nightmare dream.
Everything was just a nightmare dream and nothing had happened. When Caroline came home at the afternoon she tell her family about the dream and everybody just laughing at her. That couldn't happened they sad to her. When they sad that, everybody saw a ghost....

THE END! 

2 kommentarer:

  1. Good...
    I like the idea.
    You're good at grammar.

    Think about...
    I didn't get the end but otherwise it was good.

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